Sleepy Sickness

Tossing, turning, waiting for time to pass by.
Freezing, to the point of shivering.
Burning hot, to the point of sweating.
Cover yourself with a blanket?
No, it's too hot!
Kick off the covers and try to sleep?
No, it's too cold!
Shivering to the core, but there's a small fire being pitched in the pit of my stomach.
So feverish and dizzy.
Feeling like a zombie.
So tired, but I can't sleep.
It hurts so much!
Ugh....
Need to fight the urge to vomit.
Need to hold it in.
Don't puke. Don't puke. Don't puke. Don't puke!
Urgh...!
This feels awful!
When will it  pass?
I'm so tired...

Debut character!!

This is the first character for my comic. Name is pronounce "Rake", and I'm currently working on the rest of the character profiles. I haven't edited this pic, yet. Considering it, though, but probably won't since it is just a rough sketch.

Title and plot issues

I am currently facing a small dilemma. I've been considering writing and posting my second comic forever (the first one is still in the making, just need to ink it properly and upload it), but now I can't come up with a title or filler for it. I know how to begin and end the first chapter, but the space between is bothering me. Also, I don't know what borders to use for each page. Text boxes are fine and the script is ready to go....... I probably should just invest in a new CD drive for my comp. so I can use the Manga Debut program. I've been letting it gather dust in my trunk for too long, now. Lastly, I don't know if I should post my comics and novel on this site or one of the many others I use. I've been thinking of starting an account on comicgenisis or smackjeeves since they're popular and, as far as I know, they're free.

Forgotten Remembrance

Faint images rushing past closed eyes.
A familiar scene that I can't quite recall.
A sense of De Ja Vu.
I don't know what it is, but somehow I vaguely recall it.
A face blurred by years of repression;
I can hear a muffled voice, but whose is it?
Heavy, ragged breathing
Panting... but who is it coming from?
A faint cry from a small figure.
Yes, a child!
Weeping in the middle of the floor,
But why...?
I can hear something that I can somehow recognize.
A wet obscene squishing.
Like an animal devouring a corpse.
An obscure image.
I can't quite place a time or date, but it was definitely before they started to fade.
Yes, before the years of forget.
I wonder what it was...
I recall a sickening feeling.
A feeling of utter disgust;
A figure is there.
I don't know who it is,
but just trying to recall even a small detail of the person fills me with rage.... and regret.
I can't place why it's there, but there is a desire for strength.
Ah, that's it.
I remember now, clearly.
But.... it's definitely something better off forgotten.